2007/11/05

Migration... Clean up... New Yrunn...

We're doing some cleanup on the sites here - all of the previous stories will be moved to either:

1) History of Yrunn - for the development of the mythology of Yrunn (finished stories *only*)
2) Stories of Yrunn - Random thoughts, stories, poems, and discussions on writing, the universe and everything else

Stay tuned...

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2004/10/26

Yet Another Device

Travel diary ! Have one of the characters keep a travel, or other, diary. This would work well, for example, during the time of Amasa's captivity.

Ciara's Enchantment

Inesus paced nervously at the closed door to the vestiary. The maids he had sent within to tend to the captured goddess (plucked from the roof of a citizen of Pyrae, no less !) were slow to answer his repeated inquiries at the door.

"Rhesa ! Immediae !".

The pad of bare feet followed an excited rustle of womens' robes. There was a small creak as the door swung ajar. A thin horizontal sliver of light framed Rhesa's matronly face as she peered from within the dimly lit antechamber. She was smiling !

"Inesus, " she scolded. "Almost ready ! I will send her out in five minutes."

He nodded and made a mental note to have the door oiled; a noisy hinge could cost a vassal his head. And Inesus, above all, prized the current location of his head and its rather permanent attachment to the rest of his body.

A scant forty minutes had passed since he and the house's armed men had knocked urgently at the door of the lady within. Her husband had not been home, but the servants had bid them enter, with some visible measure of trepidation. The lady had not resisted when they took her; had not raised a hand or even asked to improve her attire. She came as she was.

He had charged Rhesa, head among the maids, with ensuring her presentability. The door creaked open again, catching Inesus in mid-step. Were beauty capable of arresting gravity, his foot might have remained suspended right there for the duration of his natural life. The lady shone like a star of the evening, and it was not to be credited solely to the skill of Rhesa's ladies-at-wait.

Her cheeks were lightly rouged but could not conceal the natural pink of youthful vitality. Those breasts which had charmed a man and an invisible prince from an archer's range away stood proudly in their cinctures, the aureloae covered only with silver cups etched into a spiral pattern. She still wore the blue garment in which Rama'eh had first espied her, but it was now drawn tight around her waist with a thin belt of pure braided silver. On her feet she wore [ed.: what's that word for calf-high sandals, again ? begins with b], similarly gilded with silver thread.

Mentally closing his eyes, and putting aside unclean thoughts in the presence of this heavenly creature, Inesus took her proferred hand. It seemed she had some idea of where she was, and why she was here. To her credit, she was not a stupid woman.

Matching her shorter stride, Inesus led the way to the antechamber. The doors were already open, but the room itself was filled with a deep and abiding darkness. The darkness carried with it a pervasive chill, one that sank into the bones like the jaws of some demonic canine. Rama'eh was here, but Inesus could not discern where. Stumbling backward while simultaneously thrusting the lady forward, he fell out of the darkness' black embrace and heaved the doors to the antechamber closed. They fell shut with a muffled thump.

"What... is.... your.... name ?"

The voice was hoarse, insistent, possessed of a desperate lust.

She whispered, "My lord, lord of Pyrae. I am Ciara. Do with me as you would."

"I desire you, your body....," Rama'eh moved closer, he was standing right before her now, towering above her, but not touching her, his face bent toward hers as the prow of some warrior ship emerging from the mists of a dark sea, "I desire all of you." His voice grew in strength and lowered in timbre, his hand rose to her throat; she did not resist. Indeed, a half-smile tugged at the corners of her lips. Her hazel eyes swam in that lovely face, eyes that were locked on his. She did not look at his hand beneath her chin but could feel the fine bristly hairs that had sprouted upon it.

"Do with me as you will, lord. I am yours."

He made a cry like a wolf that had cornered its prey. With his other hand he rent her blue gown. His cries could be heard even beyond the doors of the antechamber, and they continued throughout the night, well past the time that good men and women ought to retire.

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[ed.: later, add flashback showing how Ciara is previously visited by emissaries of a faction of spirits competitive to Anaphim (they desire his territory) and shown how to enhance her beauty to attract his eye. It's a setup, yo !]

2004/10/25

Further, on Kyle

As put forth in this article on the four types of man's heart (unresponsive, impulsive, preoccupied, responsive) and the response of each to God's Word, which of these is Kyle ?

Consider the impulsive heart: it commits eagerly to the Word when first received but with no real root of commitment. When the Resister brings attractive allurements as substitute, they too are readily accepted, crowding out the original decision. Could this apply to Kyle ? Impulsively accepting of the Way as a child (perhaps due to the power demonstrated by one of God's mighty men of war, power which Kyle desired for himself), the Resister seeks to accelerate his capitulation to the 'dark side' by advancing his departure for service in the capital city ?

Cloak, Knife, Laurel

"Strangers approach ! Sound the call !"

The watchman lowered his palm from his brow, continuing to squint into the distance at the telescoping plume of dust raised by the caravan cresting the hill two miles away. The plains of Calaxuatl were broken with gently undulating hills (mere mounds, really, in comparison to the true hills of Dodenaxuatl further to the east) covered in green, velvety grass that swayed in the region's gentle breezes.

There was a flurry of activity as the call was sounded from rampart to rampart, and brown-skinned warriors scurried up ladders to the wooden towers perched as hawks every 50 yards along the wall. The wall itself was impressive, towering twenty feet above the plains floor, and wide enough to drive a chariot on (presuming a skilled charioteer, of course !).

The core of the wall featured rectangular chunks of stone and testified to the craftmanship of the peoples who had once built this settlement, now vanished from the earth. The site of Calaxuatl - the city - had a long history. The immediate future of its current inhabitants, though, hung in the balance. The face of the wall was daubed inside and out with a chalky, stucco-like caulk.

On its northwestern side the plains road abruptly ended its eastward journey from Pyrae before a ten-foot-wide gate which was half as thick again, and securely shut. Within minutes the caravan had pulled to a stop before the solid wooden gate. For a short instant, all was silent, as if even the beasts of the field had paused from their diurnal pursuits to observe an unfolding drama.

The caravan consisted of six covered wagons, embroidered - in the custom of merchant conveyances - with the emblems and flags of the guilds whose goods they carried. The middle wagon bore the red and white flag, with hammer and silver anvil, of the metalshaper's guild.

Flanking these wagons were armed men on horseback. They were lightly armored in vests of toughened leather, similar to those worn by their horses. Their long black hair flowed uniformly down the center of their backs, and almond-shaped eyes peered from beneath the brows of their black leathern helmets. Their spears were sheathed and bows were slung over their backs. The Ciangu-atl, skilled men-at-war.

There was no movement, no reaction from beast or man within the caravan, as thick ropes were slung over the gate before which they stood. Brown-skinned men in full warpaint shimmied down the ropes; four, five, then ten. The first to hit the ground ran toward the rear of the caravan, then, two-by-two, they encircled the entire company. Their shortswords were sheathed.

"Whom do you seek ? What is your business in Calaxuatl ? Speak ! Or return whence you came."

A casual glance upward would have revealed the row of archers poised on the wall on either side of the gate. Each had spied and found his mark, each had notched his arrow to bow.

"Peace upon you, brother. We come to trade, to buy and sell of your people. We have come every third moon since your lord was a young whelp, we come again and hope for profit, both yours and ours."

The one who had first spoken nodded acknowledgement to the reply of the elderly one seated in the first wagon. Indeed, he was well known in the streets of this city, and his silver ware was in high demand on account of its outstanding quality.

"In truth, Rammarin-anen, we have mutually profited of your visits in the past. But have you not heard that times have changed ? The sons of Rama have twice this season tried to take us by force, even though we continue to pay tribute. Their armed men are never far.

Do you swear that you come with no ill intent ? Swear to me, now."

Rammarin extracted himself from the sideseat of the wagon, from behind the two horses which drove it, and limped on his cane toward the one who addressed him. He bowed before that one, and with his right hand grasped the inside of the other's left thigh.

"By Ixcthu, I do swear."

"Then I grant you entry. Save me some of your silver and tonight you feast at my house !"

Rammarin laughed and the company of brown-skins relaxed, grins stealing across their handsome faces. The warpaint had turned their features into fierce masks, but the smiles spoke to the decent hearts that beat within.

Their leader extended his left arm outward, then skyward. Presently the groan of winches sounded as the gate to Calaxuatl was opened, slowly.

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A soft drizzle of rain began to fall as the caravan rumbled through Calaxuatl's gate, though the sun shone unabated. The street through the gate broadened and bisected the hexagonal town before dividing to curl back in either direction along the opposite wall. It was paved with shards of broken and beaten pottery, an earth-colored mosaic bordered with verdant greenery and shrubs.

To the left, an enormous fenced meadow dotted with the tents of poorer citizens who tended their cattle within its confines. The rain-dusted blades of grass shimmered and framed flocks of white-backed sheep against the high wall that continued into the distance. To the right, the first dwellings rose from the ground, first mud-brick huts thatched with dried straw, then weathered stone dwellings as the street approached the town center.

Calaxuatl was quite large, covering as it did some three-and-a-half square miles. Engineered by the plain peoples of [ed.: ???] in antiquity, it had suffered but a pair of intervening owners before the nomadic Calaxuatl had seized its ruins as the site of their new home. They had rebuilt the walls and the aqueduct system which distributed precious water throughout from the two central wells. Adding their own mark, they had also built covered trenches alongside the aqueducts to pipe sewage and storm water outside the city walls.

With their levels and by the measure of the stars, the Calaxuatls found the exact center of this town they had built, and there had constructed their temple to [ed.: ???], the pastoral deity and god of the hunt now repurposed as god of the cattle farmer.

The caravan and its protectors were diverted right, on to a narrow street within stone's throw of the temple, and drew to a halt. Pretty brown faces peered from the two-story stone buildings which lined the street, as mothers and their children paused from washing and playing to observe the merchants. The street terminated in a wide-open space devoted to the pecuniary pursuits that sustained a sizable merchant class. Despite the continuing drizzle of rain, the stalls of the grocers, the fishsellers and the butchers were all surrounded by fluid knots of customers. Like the gentle undulations of a many-armed starfish, the clusters around each booth ebbed and swelled, then spilled from one to another. Throaty cries filled the air as prices were declared, challenged, modified (but just this one evening, wife of Twenty Hare, and only because I owe your husband for the rabbit meat he brought me last week !).

The rain continued to fall as cloaked figures disembarked the caravan and set to work erecting their own stalls at the edge of the throng. Eager eyes diverted from fresh cuts of meat and just caught - just this morning ! - fillets of dead-eyed fish to the makers and fixers of silver.

One figure moved more slowly than the rest. Hobbled by a limp but curiously muscled underneath the gray cloak, this one threw his hood back to let black hair glisten in the falling rain.

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Kyle selected a spot away from the other apprentices and as far away from Rammarin as he could manage. There he unfolded the small chair - a hinged crossbrace of wood with a seat of thin leather strips - and propped open the large wooden case that held his weighing implements.

He surveyed the crowd rapidly materialising around his cohort; brown faces and an excited babble overwhelmed the space which had moments before sat quietly on the market's edge. Kyle brushed the wet hair from his eyes and peered upward. The clouds were being blown southwest by the winds off the eastern mountain ranges, the showers would not last long.

Good, he thought. Tougher to climb wood slick with rain.

This was his third trip to Calaxuatl as an 'apprentice' of the guild. He knew already his target and the environs of his target's abode. Aimless meanderings through the town center after each day's work had assured that.

"Annichai'e, so-be, " a shy, dark-haired girl said by way of introduction. She was the only one speaking to him directly, the rest of the crowd having focused their silver-seeking attention on those who had, unlike Kyle, unveiled their silver wares as well as their scales.

"Amichaie'ee, " Kyle smiled back, using her own language. She was pretty and young, with a face like an angel and straight black hair. She wore the smock of a craftman's apprentice, unusual for a girl in this town.

"I remember you, " Kyle said, "from my last trip. How is your papa ?"

A slow blush curled upward from her pretty cheeks as she realized she had held some space in his memory over the last month. Her eyes were lowered but her smile was infectious; Kyle could not help but smile with her.

"Pretty girl, how is your papa ?"

"He is doing well. We have silver to shape. Will you weigh ?"

"Of course ! For you, princess, anything."

The blush threatened to envelop her entire face, and Kyle laughed. "You are a princess, see how easily you redden !"

She raised her hand to her face but her eyes betrayed the grin as she grew more comfortable in his presence. "And you are too clever a salesman !"

"Well, what would you say if I offer you and your papa a discount to let me bed at your house tonight ?" Kyle asked. He was only half-teasing, he had a definite aim in mind.

The black-haired girl cocked her head to one side and pretended to think as she drew a handful of beaten silver pieces from the pocket sewn into her smock.

"Why don't you ask papa yourself ?" she teased back.

"Why not, indeed !"

They laughed together, and her beauty grew with each flush of her precious cheeks.

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Kyle and his black-haired princess turned right, onto the main straight. She walked slowly to accommodate his limp, her eyes fastened to the street underfoot and a handsbreadth separating them. She was terminally shy, but she would serve his purpose.

He had convinced her to ask her father if he could have dinner at their house that night, but before this to escort him to the house of the town chief where he had been requested to gather some silver for repair.

For long minutes they walked silently. The palms waved fronds in the night breeze, playing at hide-and-seek with pinpoints of light in the starscape above. Even toward the city center and separated by two blocks of stone buildings, the clamor of the crowd as it surrounded the stalls of the silversmiths could still be heard. They approached the temple, passed by its impressive towering stone columns. The flickering of the sconced torches around its perimeter threw Kyle's face into crazy relief, giving him the slightly demented look of a children's pantomime puppet. His dark eyes reflected the flames but also hinted at the secret fire he tended within.

The battle was close. He began to pray, drawing deeper within himself as he waited on [ed.: ???]'s aid. His companion noticed nothing.

"I do not know your name !" she suddenly exclaimed.

Kyle turned his head sharply at the unexpected outburst.

"I must know your name if I am to ask my papa to let you stay the night," she explained, almost apologetic.

Kyle smiled at her, a genuine smile. "Call me Iss."

"Iss." She turned the word over in her mouth as she would a foreign delicacy, and briefly sought his face with her eyes.

"Emmas Quiverfull lives to the right, beyond."

"Ah !" Kyle feigned surprise, though he was well familiar with the house's location due to his previous reconnaisance. "What a lovely house !"

It was indeed. Quiverfull's home was a stone villa set on a raised mound of earth and protected by a low encircling guardwall covered in white, stuccoed plaster. The entire house was lit to pleasant effect by unseen torches hidden in a beautiful garden behind that wall. The multiple windows were rectangular, with arched tops, and covered by ornate lattice casements woven from cedar strips. The garden itself boasted fragant rose and bougainvillea, an explosion of pinks, purples and blues blending seamlessly in the unsteady light.

Even as he scanned upward Kyle marvelled at the wealth it must have taken to build and maintain a dwelling such as this. Bougainvillea was hardly native to these plains, poised as they were in the foothills of the mountain ranges to the east. It must have been transplanted from the Mediterranean at great expense, not to mention the continuing cost of watering and feeding such a topiary.

There were three stories, not including the shallow cellar dug into the earthen mound on which the whole structure stood. Each level was set back from the street to create a stepped effect. No light emitted from the windows of the top floor; Kyle surmised it to be the shrine to the household god. The windows of the other two levels were lamplit but the casements were closed, so he could not determine the number of occupants.

And here, before him, stood two guards. Like their brethren who had met his caravan outside the gates, their faces wore warpaint and they sheathed swords at their sides. As the personal guard of the chief's household they would be the biggest, brightest and best of Calaxuatl's fighting men. Rippling, heavily sinewed arms and six-foot stature testified at least to the former.

The black-haired girl murmured a soft good evening, but their eyes were fastened on Kyle.

"Tanner's daughter, what is your business here this evening ?" the seeming elder of the guards asked.

There was no hint of relaxation in their pose, Kyle noted. Each rested a hand on the hilt of his sword. He was sure they were expert swordsmen, but he would give them no -

Phhhhhhhhhht! was the sound the flying metallic object made as it sliced through the fragrant air, too quick to catch a glint from the hidden torches...... the elder guard's half-severed throat gurgled loosely as his lips moved without noise and he grasped both hands to his neck. Kyle had hurled the throwing star clasped in his palm from his right hand while resting his weight on the cane in his left. Suddenly unlame, and now leaning forward in the aftermath of his quick throw, he arc'ed the tip of that staff from earth to the open throat of the other guard. There had been no more than a flicker in the eyes of that guard as he realized that Kyle was foe, not friend, but it was enough. He never did more than tighten his grasp on the hilt of his weapon before he was kneeling before Kyle, clutching a crushed larynx.

Kyle looked upward, scanning the house again. The attack had been noiseless, there was no response from within. Quickly stepping behind the kneeling guard, he too knelt, crossed his forearms from behind around the head, twisted quickly. The neck was dislocated with a satisfying snick! and now there were two lifeless bodies before the entrance to the outer wall, one outlined by a slowly growing shroud of crimson.

The clock in his head was inching dangerously close to zero, the point at which the girl would scream. The entire attack had taken about three seconds. On the fourth Kyle had flown to her, covered her mouth with his rough palm, unsheathed the dagger on his hip. Her eyes were comically wide with disbelief.

He paused before the kill, though, something he had never done in battle. He had never held a woman so close before killing her. He searched her eyes for a second longer, lowered his palm. Later, he would struggle to understand exactly why he let her go. Was it that he saw something there, in her eyes, this pretty thing whom he'd flirted with an hour earlier ? Was it excitement ? Or was it the absence of something - the absence of fear ?

"Go !" he hissed, and pointed back down the street. "Your town will fall within the hour. Make haste !"

She sucked in a breath and began to pant heavily, like an animal in shock.

"GO !"

Kyle turned on his heel and pulled the two-toed climbing slippers from his pouch as he ran up the four steps to the doorway of the house.

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Tenuaxtl nursed the child at her breast, unaware of the terror to come. A slight breeze ushered the fragrance of the garden below through the half-open casement and into the large room. She thought the rustle outside the window was that of a roosting bird, paid it no mind. The low hiss, punctuated by a small pop, did draw her attention. Her head swivelled leftward. She was astonished to meet the eyes of an insect-like beast from a child's feverish nightmare. No, this was not an insect, it was a man. A masked man..... what she had taken to be a predatory proboscis was actually some sort of hollow tube held to his lips - a cane ? The eyes were the only orifice uncovered by the mask and they glittered cruelly, staring straight through her.

She opened her mouth to scream - big, ragged gusts of air left her lungs in a terrified wail. There was a thud behind her as an armed guard fell to the floor, unconscious. The blowdart had found its mark, piercing the vein on his thigh like a mosquito's razor mandible. Within one stroke of his doomed heart the venom would begin to suffocate that critical muscle and paralyze his nervous system.

He was through the window now, this insect-man, crawling noiselessly and with feline grace. Tenuaxtl saw the baby she hugged close to her breast reflected in the flawless mirror of the dagger in his hand, held along the inside of his wrist.

One one side of the assassin's wrist lay the skin of man; supple, pliable, Merciful. On the other side lay hard steel sharpened to a fine point, Death.

Kyle was not coming for her, though. He let her continue screaming, raw with primal fear, to draw the other armed men into the house.

Emmas Quiverfull was the first to enter the room, drawn by his wife's cry. His sword was drawn and the battle instinct had twisted his handsome features into a rictus snarl. Quiverfull launched himself, propelled by powerful thighs, toward the black-clad figure crouching before his wife and newborn. His sword was raised overhead. Sword against dagger. Steps before he drew within range, Kyle had launched into a tightly bunched roll over a forearm planted transverse on the smooth stone floor. He emerged from a ball right at Quiverfull's feet, began to roll again, past him. As he tucked into the second roll, the sword descended downward; the dagger flashed once, severing Quiverfull's left Achilles tendon.

He was now out of range, the sword had reached its nadir and Quiverfull was toppling forward without the expected support of his left leg. His face registered no pain, only bewilderment at this masked man who flitted like an insect. Kyle was fully behind him now, rising from one knee. The red-slicked blade plunged once, twice: first into Quiverfull's back, twisting and severing muscle in the lower back. Then again, severing the jugular as his body married hard to the ungiving stone floor.

One by one, the four armed men who entered the room would be dispatched in similarly efficient fashion as Emmas Quiverfull's widow cowered, rooted to her chair, observing the upending of her neat world with each killing blow. Her lips moved but no more sound issued, her secret cry to the household god passed seemingly unheeded. It would have given her no comfort to know that even now Asakin son of Nor stealthily led a battalion through the sewers of Calaxuatl and below the city walls, or that an army ten thousand strong lay in wait in the fields beyond those walls.

After Kyle secreted himself at the bottom of the well near the temple - using his hollow cane as a breathing device - the terrors from within and without the walls would spring forth, and within the hour would take her life and the life of her child.

Now, she prayed. Would that death were quick, for both widow and infant.

Anaphim

... is the prince of Pyrae. This is the capital city of the empire, and the city in which Amasa and Kyle trained during their service (Kyle under Taemporo, Amasa under [ed.: ???]). It is the city to which they return (westward) upon the beginning of their quest.

  • The woman who attracts Anaphim's desire (prompting his seizure of Rama'eh's form) is not there by accident. Remember that Lucifer is the original son of the morning and beauty his forte. A rival faction of fallen angels desires Anaphim's territory and one of their emissaries taught Ciara the art of enhancing her beauty, placed her on the scene at the opportune moment.

Tempests of the Soul

Rama'eh's spirit was disturbed within him, but a specific cause eluded his rational efforts to discern. He left his compulsive pacing of the marble antechamber adjoining the stateroom, refusing to acknowledge the salute of the chief steward, and grasped a golden brazier from its bracket on the wall. The flame of the torch within cast his silhouette in sharp relief onto the columns and walls of the antechamber; in shadow he seemed to climb to the arched ceiling far above and brush against the painted frescoes.

The chief steward, skin black as polished ebony, recognised his master's mood and thought it best to deliver news of the latest campaign later in the evening. After Rama'eh had supped and wined he would more fully appreciate the absolute defeat of the Calaxuatls to the east, but now he was not to be disturbed.

Rama'eh threw open the door to the verandah, half-absorbed in thought. As befitted a ruler in a time of war, he yet wore the black tunic of the overlord - ultimate commander of forces in the field. His semitic heritage was betrayed in the proud aquiline nose and keenly chiseled features. Broad shoulders bore the silver-trimmed epaulettes of a general and their reflection of the torch's light bathed him in a metallic brilliance. The women of his harem marvelled privately at his masculine beauty, his was such a primal attraction.

He thrust the brazier into a waiting bracket on the railing which separated the verandah from the plunging, dark depths of the hill on which the fort was built. Rama'eh surveyed the twinkling lights of the hearth below, hypnotic in their multiplicity and orderly confinement to the city's grid of streets and avenues.

Falling away from his vantage point the city unfurled before him like a scroll. Pyrae had been a home to many peoples and countless generations. This incarnation of the 'holy metropolis', house of the Temple to Anaphim and to Rama'eh, Overlord of the eastern empire, was its most magnificent to date. The broadest avenue (it was called 'Grand' in the Common Tongue), running roughly north/south, was studded along its sides with gently murmuring fountains. Its cobbled pavingstones had borne the hooves of many a victory parade, and the bare feet of countless captured slaves; but never yet had they suffered the passage of an invading army.

Graceful palms lined the Grand avenue. Like perpetual ladies-at-wait, they clustered around the dome of the Temple just off the city center. Most of those strolling the main promenades - lovers hand in hand, sons of noblemen gathered in knots to pronounce philosophy - wore white cotton robes, denoting them of the [ed.: ???] caste. Cotton raiment was forbidden to slaves or members of the lowest caste, on punishment of death.

Less visible from his perch, but nonetheless known to Rama'eh, the temple prostitutes sat in their colored robes on the temple steps, beckoning to the white-robed passerby.

"Rama, son of man - what do you see ?"

The disembodied voice issued from the air next to Rama'eh, though no human stood with him in the night air. He did not turn. He knew that it was for his ears alone.

"My lord, my lord. I am glad that you have come."

Rama'eh swept his hand out into space, encompassing the great city below with its twinkling lights.

"All this I have gained, with your help, yet I find resistance to the east. The empire is not yet complete. This bloody people thwart my best warriors, again and again !".

"Their end is near. Calaxuatl has already fallen."

Rama'eh's head jerked upward imperceptibly. The change in his demeanour was immediate ! A sly grin of satisfaction spread across his fine features, marring his beauty but somehow increasing his intrigue, his appeal to the onlooker (were there to be any so foolhardy as to risk swift death by spying upon the overlord in his private quarters).

"Your warriors, led by Asakin son of Nor, have exacted the revenge you demanded for acts of resistance. The men of the city, even now, are being flayed alive. Their heads will be posted, every man of them, along the walls. Before day breaks it will be done as a testament to those who dare oppose Anaphim."

Rama'eh's smile grew, but froze slightly in its progress at Anaphim's last words.

"Indeed. I will utterly spoil that wretched haven of harlots." He spat, emphatically, over the railing. "My power will be unchecked, now, in the East. For this, I thank you, lord."

There was no reply.

The movement of light caught Rama'eh's peripheral vision and he turned his head to the left, away from the city proper, to seek its source. The hill on which the fort stood was ringed at its base by the whitewashed villas of some of the city's most privileged. It was one of these that provoked his scrutiny now, fifty yards downhill with only two treetops interrupting his line of sight. The door to the roof had been opened, spilling golden light from the fire of many torches onto the patio.

Into this pool of liquid brilliance stepped what might have been a mermaid of the light. The beauty of her face was so devastating as to limit comparison. Her chin was elfin, her symmetry was perfect; her flaxen hair shone like beaten gold. Her skin was pale and absorbed the golden hues of the diffracted torchlight. She wore a diaphanous blue gown which at this distance teased to be transparent. Oh, how he wished it could be !

The goddess afar soon made clear her intent: half hidden beyond the pool of light which had announced her arrival lay a tub of water, probably of the clawfooted kind which rich men could afford to keep on their patios. Her back to the fort above, she let the blue garment slide from her shoulders. He imagined he could hear the rustle it made as it gathered around her ankles. He was imagining, was he not ?

She presented a brief profile as she lifted long slender leg after leg to step into the tub. What proud, beautiful breasts, defying gravity with upturned nipples !

Rama'eh could scarcely breathe, and his loins were aflame before he realised that he was being... entered. Anaphim swept with power into his body, submerging his spirit and grasping control of his physical being. His spirit did not cry out, did not resist - the feeling was unfamiliar but strangely, not unpleasant.

Ramah'eh whirled and in a hoarse voice cried for the chief steward.

"Inesus ! Inesus ! Attangae immediae !"

And again: "Inesus !"

Inesus rushed to the verandah doors. His dark brow betrayed a few drops of moisture. One never knew what capricious whim of the master might end in bad report for a chief steward, and he feared every urgent call to service might be his last.

"My lord."

Ramah'eh seized Inesus by the shoulder and so superhuman was his strength that he actually lifted both sandled feet from the marble as he strode back to the railing. He pointed to the villa below, its roof still lit by torches.

"Bring me that woman ! It must be done now !"

"Y-yes, master........ Master !"

"Yes !"

"I beg of you to release me that I may do your bidding !"

Inesus' feet propelled him back into the antechamber as soon as they regained sweet communion with the floor, as fast as they could carry him. He clutched his crushed shoulder as he gathered the lord's armed men, all the way down the hill on his mission to fulfil Anaphim's lust.




2004/10/24

Further, on Amasa

  • Vignette: as a young girl, she encounters Archios, an angel who assumes human form. She does not realise he is not human, and he tests her with several questions. Later in life she meets him again (in a dream ?) and realises that he was assessing her allegiance (whether to the Kingdom of Heaven or that of the god of this world)
  • Vignette: Rasfarin, who will later be animated by the spirit of the Resister, begins his career as the eternally ambitious counsellor to the proctor of the ward of which Amasa's village is a part. He espies her one day and sees within her a purity stemming from her devotion to the Kingdom of Heaven. Not at this time realising he is being influenced by spirits, he desires to possess her (both her physical being and her spirit). The spirits who influence him have a motive: they discern that Amasa will be central in God's fight against them as they attempt to gain control of the empire on earth, and thus, of men's minds.
  • Vignette: Rasfarin's first encounter with Amasa:- he grasps her hand and his spirit tries to grasp hers, but she withdraws (spiritually) despite his seductiveness
  • Note: Although Amasa's father loved her deeply, his relationship with her was distant. Why ? A nominal believer most of his life, he became deeply agnostic after the death of his second wife (Amasa's mother). How could a loving God allow such a beautiful and spotless woman to die in the prime of her life ? In Amasa he sees a deep devotion to the One True God that he cannot comprehend, and that he cannot (perhaps chooses not to) share
  • Vignette: describe a series of dreams Amasa has as a child which portend to her future. To do with eschewing pride ? Maybe ? Of course, she does not understand the significance at the time. Archios is in her dreams, and she meets him in human form later in life.
    ii) Show Kyle's physical exertions in developing his skills in the jyoro. Show him failing. Struggling. Show how Taemporo sidesteps his strengths and exposes his weaknesses (impatience/impulsivity, feeling of invincibility, self-reliance, pride)
    iii) Remember: at one point Kyle and Amasa are separated. This is becasue they have both fallen into sin, Amasa by sleeping with Kyle, and Kyle by succumbing to the Dark Arts to further his power. Amasa is taken into captivity and it seems as thoguh Ixcthu has deserted her. In truth, though, she is under discipline.
    THEREFORE, make it an issue for Amasa to struggle with her faith in an all-powerful God. She debates internally between serving other gods, who bequeath magi with manifest power (such as the elemental magi - fire, earth, water - display). Ixcthu is derided as the god of chance (many of Amasa's own displays have taken the form of seeming coincidence, and this is also why Ixcthu is God of the Hunt). In fact, myth holds that Ixcthu fathered the other gods but lost his powers to his spawn (how ?).
  • In captivity, Amasa runs the gamut of emotions, from extreme anger (she is raped many times after grievously wounding some of her captors), to denial, grief, etc. - before finally calling again upon Ixcthu. He reveals that He has been with her all along. She has a 'road to Damascus' moment.

On Spirits and their Domains

Okay, we know of spiritual powers, principalities, domains, authorities and rulers. I've always wondered how they were established, and for what purpose.

Well, in my reading I've come across several thrilling ideas. Daniel speaks of one of God's messenger angels being delayed due to having to fight the Prince of Persia, who might have been a man but is clearly animated by a spirit antagonistic to the Almighty. And Genesis writes of God setting angels over the nations according to the 'number of the sons of God' (angels).

This article posits that (some of) these angels rebelled and came under Satan's influence ! Could you imagine the process by which this could have happened ?

Imagine Satan appearing in the councils of the princes and slyly observing how skilful their stewardship has been, how the human kings under their counsel are expanding in territory and influence, and how the credit should accrue to them (the princes) rather than to their Author and Creator !

  • Children are brought up in the faith of their clan, meaning that the adopt the god of their fathers and forefathers. At a certain age (just before they go to serve in the military or trade school, for example_ they have a bar/bat mitzvah-type ceremony wherein they affirm their allegiance to this go (or in rare cases, disavow it for allegiance to another). Amasa's father has stopped sacrificing and is a nominal follower of Ixcthu, and her decision to sacrifice in secret exposes her to the reidicule of her peers (Ixcthu the God of Coincidence ! they laugh. Ixcthu-whose-Powers-Were-Stolen !) and leads to estrangement from her father. Once, when he catches her sacrificing he sweeps her altar to the floor and rages about the injustice of a God who would let her mother die. So she is wracked by doubt despite her resolve to stay true (what follower of Ixcthu occupies high rank in the magi ? And she is a woman to boot !) What of those who do not serve Ixcthu ? Are they doomed ?
  • Note that in the magick arts there is that which can be learned by any one with enough application (e.g. use of herbs and projection of one's spiriit to affect the natural world). That type of knowledge can take you to the level of -ai. Then there is that which requires a natural ability (e.g. invocation of other spiritis to divine, gain knowledge, control the physical world) and can take you to the level of -rai, -kai. Those who don't have the ability usually drop out to become philosophers, priests, etc.

2004/10/23

The Jyoro

"Proceed."

The stacatto tattoo of wood on wood was immediate as the two students began the dance of attack and retreat, offense and defense. The wooden lokken is a staff measuring four feet in length and half the diameter of a man's wrist. Fashioned of dense xlaptlua wood and tapered at each end, it is the jyoro's most basic weapon in the instruction of armed combat.

Kyle shifted his weight from haunch to haunch as he watched the students in the circle do battle. Without turning his head he could feel Anen Taemporo's gaze upon him. He would be called next, he knew. He nudged the boy next to him, but Esmorai was terrified - more terrified than most of the other boys here, and with good reason - of unduly attracting Taemporo's attention. Esmorai continued to stare straight ahead, desperately pretending to focus on the action in the circle.

A distant rustle of robes led to the pad of bare feet on the wooden floor slats directly behind Kyle. He had deliberately sat in the third and last row, he knew his name would be called -

"Kyle-ai. You will face the winner."

Taemporo-anen's voice barely rose above a whisper. In fact, both master and pupil had known Kyle would stand in the circle next, the element of timing was the student's only question.

He turned his head to fix upon the aged man's lined face, to seek the outline of the lips from which the words had issued, behind the copious and immaculately trimmed white beard that flowed forever below his chin.

In the circle the grunts and thuds escalated as lokken found unguarded flesh with its brutal caress.

"Taemporo-anen, the current match is not over."

"It is, now."

The younger combatant was shorter in stature than the dark-haired youth he faced, though equal in age. It was a small wonder that he wielded the lokken with such speed, he was barely taller than it was ! Blood dripped from a gash on his temple where he had been wounded, but most of the onlookers were transfixed by something else - the look of fear in his eyes.

The dark-haired one was relentless. For a youth of fourteen his biceps were preternaturally large, traced through with angry veins that now pulsed as if to strain free of the skin that bound them. With stroke after stroke, left to right and back, overhead and diagonally, he hammered the defenses of the shorter one as fast as they could be erected.

"Aaaaah !"

The finishing blow was no different from any of the preceding other than that it found its mark. Short, sharp, to the left side of the neck. The short one collapsed immediately, limbs relieved of their duty to support his unconscious body.

Kyle turned his head back to the circle and began to rise in the same motion. He padded barefoot to the circle after bowing to Taemporo; bowed again to his opponent as he reached the center of the ring. The dark-haired youth's bow in return was perfunctory. Taemporo-anen would never have tolerated an outright sneer on the youth's face, but it was there in his eyes. The veins in his neck were raised ridges and his face was flushed with something other than exertion. Pride ? Hatred ?

"Proceed."

Kyle might have been able to tell were he focusing on the youth's visage, but he had already withdrawn into The Loosing of the Heron From Its Trap.

Breathe, go down - unwrap the cord from the leg of the heron.

In his mind's eye the beautiful bird, its plumage the color of indolent clouds in a clear blue sky, battered its wings in vain as it tried to lift skyward. The red cord was still curled around its slender right leg, binding it to the earth.

Don't struggle, I'm letting you go.

The dark-haired one had raised his lokken. His brown eyes met Kyle's green eyes as he began an intricate puzzle of feints, thrusts, slashing probes of Kyle's defenses. Kyle parried them not-consciously as he sank deeper into the Loosing of the Heron. Wood on wood, the explosive percussions filling every corner of the jyoro.

I'm letting you go. Don't struggle... fly !

He saw the heron beat its wings again as the red cord he had loosed from its leg fell to the marsh floor. Without restraint it was free to rise toward that blue sky. The familiar relaxation began to envelop him.

Shtluaxl, I call you now. The heron has been loosed. I ask you to let me Fly With the Heron.

The audience was entirely quiet, not a sideways glance cast nor a breath released. Hairs raised on the backs of youthful necks as the spirit presence - felt but not seen - was summoned and steadily grew.

The dark-haired one was reaching the peak of his exertion. Every muscle, every fiber of his being endeavored to overcome Kyle. The ease with which he countered the incoming blows exposed the dark-haired one to ridicule among his peers, and that was unacceptable.

A low slashing feint, left to right, was quickly reversed as Kyle angled his lokken diagonally across his body to counter. No contact. Withdrawn, redirected as a forward thrust toward Kyle's sternum, almost as quick as the speed of thought.

The edge of the dark-haired one's staff seemed about to pierce Kyle's torso when suddenly he was not there. In one motion, with his right foot remaining planted on the polished floor, he had brought his leading left foot back and continued to pivot 180 degrees counterclockwise, away from the thrust. Kyle's back was now in front and to the left of his opponent, his lokken held horizontally in a center grip. His opponent was still fully extended at the end of the thrusting forward motion. Smoothly, Kyle pivoted again and smacked the left side of his assailant's head, once, twice. The lokken seemed to increase in weight as it travelled downward, so loud was the twin report of the blows. To the onlookers though, the motion registered as one blow. Their eyes were not quick enough to catch the first strike.

A fount of blood streamed from the other's ear as his eardrum ruptured.

"One Flies With the Heron only to find the weakness of a superior opponent. You defeated this one before you entered the circle."

So clear were Shtluaxl's words that Kyle was almost startled into full consciousness. He almost turned to scan the faces of the rapt audience to determine whether they too had heard the voice. But he did not.

I want to utterly destroy him.

The dark-haired one had bent to one knee, lokken hanging limply in his left hand. His head was bowed as he gasped deeply and supported himself with his right palm on the jyoro floor. He could not even reach up to stem the flow of sticky red blood staining the collar of his white robe, much less defend another blow.

"Does he deserve destruction ? Defeat is enough."

I hate him. He must be destroyed ! He insulted my father's lineage, once.

"You cannot Fly With the Heron without discipline. Defeat is enough for this one."

Kyle's hands moved from the center grip to hold the lokken hand-over-hand at one end. Fully erect over his kneeling rival, he began to sit into the Eagle Strikes From Above form. Deadly enough as an open-hand technique, the lokken would magnify the power of the strike many scores of times, even if the practitioner was not adept with the Heron style. At the last moment, Kyle slowed the speed of his downward descent. Nevertheless, the end of the lokken crashed into an already bloodied mop of black hair with crushing velocity, compressing neck and spinal column all the way to the tailbone.

This youth would never walk again, never mind fight. But this was the rule of the ring even in training. This was the rule of [ed.: insert the name of the military class, here]. This was the rule of life, and of the universe.

Kyle returned to the center of the ring, bowed, and began to pad back to his seat on the jyoro floor. He caught Esmorai's eye first and suppressed the momentary surge of pride at the mix of awe and disbelief on his friend's face. He found Taemoro-anen's eyes next. Still half in the realm of the spirit, he sensed that the impassive eyes did not betray the true emotion beneath that weathered visage. Anen Taemoro would have preferred that he withheld the final blow, but he was not displeased (this was the rule of life, and of the universe).

Kyle permitted himself a fleeting smile. Master was... proud !









Amasa and Kyle

The siblings live in a martial, centrally-governed society with many far flung satellites (alike to Mesoamerican Aztec or Roman society), of which their village is a part. It is likely that their geographic location would correspond to somewhere in today's Mediterranean locale.

There is a meritocratic class system: while the martial arts are taught from a young age and military service is compulsory, education is also highly prized. Migration from one class to another is largely based on, but not limited to, one's station of birth. Both the truly gifted and the truly determined can endlessly improve their lot in life.

Proctors are assigned to manage administrative regions, such as a collection of villages, a ward, or a county. [ed.: note the definition of proctor, so applicable to a system of government which combines religious and political power]. They answer in turn, to a hierarchical system of government crowned by ... [ed.: ??? do we have a full-on, Iranian-style theocracy here ? is there any element of a federal democracy, as might be an option in the case where a powerful central power has gradually assimilated multiple lesser powers of varying cultures ?]

[Ed. note: More on this after the jump....but for now:

- Amasa sees addicts for the first time on her visit to the main city, where she is taken by Rsforin. Describe them in detail - they are Gypsies - without letting on that they are addicts, just describe their physical appearance and compulsive behaviour. More on the substance they are using, how they ingest it, and its connection with magic/the spirit world, will follow later. And remember to save some shizzle for book two !]

2004/10/22

A Google Search to Remember

First Principles

Perhaps the training of an engineer is proving indispensable in this endeavour. While the words are given to me, they naturally pass through my subconscious (a filter) before emerging on the read page. The interpretation (filtering) which I apply draws heavily on my belief in construction from first principles and fundamental truths. Among these, that the Word of God is God-inspired, infallible, and is a source of multiple levels of revelation according to the inclination of the Spirit of God and the prepared heart of the recipient.

Some important first principles that I have observed, in no particular order here:

  • The rule of threes. God often executes His will in 3 acts. Humans reflect this in their creative writing and music, too (e.g. the typical 3-act structure in the stories told by plays, novels, opera)
  • The establishment of signs and portents in the stars for interpretation by man
  • The myths of most major cultures which have survived for a long time (e.g. those of Native and aboriginal cultures) tend to have some basis in ancient truth on the major issues (e.g. creation, the spirit world). They are like corrupting savoury fruit (sweet to make it palatable to the hearer) wrapped around a kernel of historical fact
  • Many successful pieces of creative fiction are set in a time of change.Things are changing around the protagonist(s), and the "what happens next" page-turning instinct happens because the reader wants to know how the character's motivations will conflict with the changes in the world around them

On The Use of Interludes

Use them, interspersedly, to describe the gods, their fateful dalliances with mortal man and the resulting procreation, the rule of their spawn on Earth and the resulting hierarchical system of government which has migrated to the most successful nations on the face of Yrunn (or Old-Earth), the need for god-kings descended from this god-man progeny since the reveleation of God's plan (the Jews, Gentiles, resurrection, etc.) was not yet fulfilled.

Note: fix firmly the timeline of this story by researching 1st books of Bible and accompanying commentary.

Dollah Dollah Bill, Y'all

Vignette: Remember to pursue the story of a dollar bill which passes from hand to hand, starting with the dollar (one among many to come, to be certain) passing from an addict to his dealer, and ending with the same dollar as part of a donation by a wealthy benefactor to a homeless shelter (where same addict goes to eat every day).

Rules of Magi

Note on magick: Define the rules of magic.

For example: in order to foretell the future one is actually relying either on the Spirit of God or on the spirit of the Resister (although some practitioners may indeed believe these deeds wrought of their own feeble power). There is a compromise in every such transaction, a contract entered into with real consequences for the practitioner. Explore.

  • as with (the biblical) Simon the Sorcerer, show how men try to possess the Gift by reason and logic but end with a weak facsimile. You see, the Gift can be obtained by faith alone. The visceral practice of magic must be made real in this writing ! Also, the potential for addiction (some magiuse pharmacological means to enhance the power in their practice, sometimes to enhance the very experience of practicing magic).
  • Hey, also remember the ranks of magi: -ai, -rai, -kai, and -anen
  • Schools of magic ! Dueling ryu ! Those who preach its use for martial purposes. Those who propose its restriction to a learned aristocracy (lower classes not smart enough to be possessors of this precious gift). The naturals, of all classes, to whom the Gift comes freely and untutored.
Note the similarity between the numbers of those who are skilled in the practice of magick and those skilled in other arts: their ranks are few, slender in part due to the wholehearted dedication it takes to master any given craft. There are, however, many minimally skilled pretenders. Witness, in our world, the hordes of clergy and the few true Men of God. Or the vast numbers of seamen, yet so few entrusted with Captains' rank.


New Poem

...........here. Inspired by a true story !

2004/10/21

Origins

A crackling hiss; the small flame at the center of the firepit leapt and danced as it grew to consume the circle of dried lnyanyan branches piled around it. Twisting shadows met and kissed, writhed together on the rockface walls of the stone hutch, synchronous with the dancing flame.

Jeonata crouched as he entered the hutch through the low opening that was the only ingress. He crept slowly to avoid stumbling over some inconvenient pebble on the dirt floor, as his arms were filled with lnyanyan branches. Their fragrance stained his hands, his clothes, the very fabric of the air in the small hutch. On another world it might have been described as a smell like sage and honeydew, a wet and heavy wild perfume.

Jeonata's shadow, alternately magnified to grotesque proportions and reduced to that of the tiniest scurrying fieldmouse, joined those in delirious interplay on the stone walls. Man had joined the dance of the elements, a foreshadowing of what was to come within these rounded walls.

He carefully placed the branches around the outer fringes of the fire, packing them closely but not too tightly. Reverently, he cupped the circular retaining wall surrounding the pit (dug into the dirt floor) in which the blaze nested. It was warm to the touch, not hot: perfect. Like the stone hutch itself, the wall was built of small boulders - carefully chosen - piled one atop the other. The spaces between were caulked with mud.

These boulders were whitewashed to signify their important function. The fire was not for warmth's sake (although the cold season's chill was approaching; he could feel it in his bones). It was not to roast the meat of the deer he hoped to kill on the morrow. No, this fire was for the sweat.

Satisfied, he lifted the beaten copper pan to sit atop the circle of dried branches, directly above the fire. The pan's edges were supported by the top of the retaining wall. The character of the shadows had changed; less restless now the multitude of dancing shadows, but one shadow remained distinct, clearly defined - his.

"Icxthnu'a na tollemae
Chthoi, lanamae chtoi, lanamae chtoi...."

The reflection of the subdued flames on the copper lit upon Jeonata's face, caressing the pockmarked skin as he reached into the hide pouch slung under his armpit. From within he withdrew a handful of chlauhaoctl pods. He tossed them into the copper pan, where they would swell and split as the water began to boil, and release their intoxicating vapours.

"Chthoi, lanamae chtoi, tollamae chtoi..."

Cross-legged, he sat against the curved wall farthest away from the door opening. A minute passed. Two. Twelve. Presently the entire hutch was filled with the steaming essence of chlauhaoctl. His eyes were closed. Beads of sweat dripped from every orifice in search of haven within the driest folds of his garment.

"Icxthnu'a na tollemae, jaa'na math nyan nae chtoi..."

Perhaps two more minutes passed, perhaps it had been an hour. His chanting was now automatic, originating from the conditioned subconscious. He felt no different save for the rushing sound of a distant wind in his inner ear, and the disconcerting feeling that the ground beneath him had become progressively less solid.

He heard a sound alike to the approach of a horde of skittering beetles, and opened his eyes. Icxthu stood before him in human form, that of a squat, black-haired man who could have been Jeonata's twin (in appearance, at least).

His first impulse was to scramble backward in absolute fright, but the rock wall behind him arrested his motion. The back of his head would bear a nasty bruise on the morrow as a reminder of this encounter. He stumbled to find words but none came, so complete was his terror.

"I have heard your voice."

"G-g- Great S-spirit, I asked only for your help in the hunt t-t- tomorrow ! I have already sacrificed of the herbs I gathered.... why do I deserve death ! Now that I have seen your face I will di-".

Icxthu interrupted him gently. "You will not die. Your sacrifices have been agreeable. I am come to direct you. Tomorrow when you go to water the hare will lead you to a root with a white and purple flower. You must crush this root, boil it, and bury the water in an urn for nine days. When you drink thereof during the sweat, you will have greater power."

Jeonata blinked, or was somehow compelled to close his eyes, and when he opened them again the fire had died and Icxthu was gone.